Wednesday, 17 November 2010

How to Avoid Using Sexist Language

It is inappropriate to use the personal pronouns he or his (or she or her) to refer to a person whose sex might be male or female. English has a number of gender-neutral words such as person, as well as a number of gender-neutral pronouns such as anyone, everyone and no one. However, it does not have gender-neutral singular personal pronouns.

A good workaround is to use the plural possessive form, their. The Oxford English Dictionary 2001 sanctions the use of this form to refer to ‘belonging or associated with a person whose sex is not specified’. In this way, the writer can avoid using sexist language. For example:

Every competent lawyer must ensure that their legal knowledge is kept up to date.

Other methods can also be employed to avoid using he or his. These include:

• Deleting the pronoun reference altogether if possible. For example, ‘the director read the documents as soon as they were delivered to him’: delete to him.’

• Changing the pronoun to an article like a or the. For example, ‘the sales representative assisted the customer with his order’ can be changed to ‘the sales representative assisted the customer with the order’.

• Using who, especially when he follows if. For example, ‘if he does not pay attention to detail, a finance officer is worse than useless’ should read ‘the finance officer who does not pay attention to detail is worse than useless’.

• Repeating the noun instead of using a pronoun. For example, ‘When considering the conduct of negotiations, the delegate should retain an objective view. In particular, he [read the delegate] should…’

• Use the plural form of the noun. For example, instead of writing ‘a lawyer must check that he has all the relevant papers before attending court’, write ‘lawyers must check that they have all the relevant papers before attending court’.

• Use the infinitive form of the verb, including to (e.g. to perform, to draft etc). For example, instead of writing ‘the lawyer agrees that he will draft the contract’, write ‘the lawyer agrees to draft the contract’.

• If all else fails, use the passive form. For example, instead of writing ‘he must deliver the files to X’, write ‘the files must be delivered to X’. This is not a perfect solution, since the passive form makes it unclear who is responsible for delivering the files to X. Therefore, it should only be used if the identity of the parties has already been established in a previous sentence, or if the question of responsibility for undertaking the actions is unimportant.